Thursday, January 17, 2008

Love hurts and how it does!


You weren’t there, when I needed you most

And time convinced me that, you won’t be there, when I would need you most

You fail to see my tears, you fail to see my smile

You don’t understand a bit

You aren’t as crazy I am, as I was

I stand next to all your preferences (material and otherwise)

You never correct me, or you don’t have the courage to correct me… You tried to find a good riddance in my mistakes

You don’t remember a bloody thing about us

You don’t die to see me, you don’t die to meet, and you don’t die to talk to me

AND YOU NEVER SAW THE SUNSET WITH ME AS YOU HAD PROMISED

3 comments:

Niel said...

So soft
the brief touch of your lips
on my cheek.

Was I almost intruding?

"Look after yourself "
should have been
"I love you!"

Then the Jumbo flew over
my head
and I shouted my love
above the roar
and thundering thrust

. . . as if you'd hear.

Through the clouds in my eyes
I watched you fly away
and wished I'd been born with wings.

Kiran said...

nice one....wanna add one line -

when i cared ,u didnt cared to notice..
i noticed this, but still i cared to care for u !!!!!

TurbulentTranquility said...

Love - lovely lines Barsha. But you know what I've always believed :) If everyone could love the way we did - selflessly, crazily, madly, passionately - they wouldn't be us! Forgive the poor souls (only for not being able to reciprocate the feeling - for the rest kill'em). They can never be what we are .. were... donno :)